married, open, she knows, has done for years, none of this is new or dramatic in our house.
what i cannot work out is where on the page it goes.
first line feels blunt. it also means the first thing anyone knows about me is a piece of admin about somebody else, and there is a version of that which reads as a warning rather than as information.
further down feels dishonest. by the time someone gets to line ten they have already built a picture, and now i am correcting it, and a correction always sounds like something that was being kept back even when it was in writing the whole time.
i have also noticed that the couples on here who get taken seriously write it very differently from the ones who obviously do not, and i cannot put my finger on what the difference is.
so where does yours go and what does it say? and for people who have dated somebody partnered, what did you want to see and where.
